Toddling Sleeps
Rampant Thoughts
Wondered me??
What lied Beneath!!
Broken half
Cuddled as an arc
Volcanic cerebrations
Aggressed me!!
My heart and mind conflicted
As to wat made us bolted
Was it a Haste or my Fate?
Ahrrg! I enviced, "Cut the Crap"
bullied me
What is it that is raging in me?
Drink Down - comes a soulful voice
I marveled
A white or the black side!
A T T I T U D E
Bull's Eye!
A saying too equaled it:
(Whenever you're in conflict with someone, there is one factor that can make the difference between damaging your relationship and deepening it. That factor is attitude.”)
Then I realised
attitude shot down
Not mine but his
even more
Ragged Me!
and So the relation did not Ship...
Times had overcome
Lessons I learnt
Voided me
No more dreadful sleeps.
Lived the life
Locked the smile
Opened Views
Laid arms through
Another thought - stuck to my mind
Of the Author
Of those times:
(“Find a guy who calls you beautiful instead of hot, who calls you back when you hang up on him, who will lie under the stars and listen to your heartbeat, or will stay awake just to watch you sleep... wait for the boy who kisses your forehead, who wants to show you off to the world when you are in sweats, who holds your hand in front of his friends, who thinks you're just as pretty without makeup on. One who is constantly reminding you of how much he cares and how lucky his is to have you.... The one who turns to his friends and says, 'that's her.'”)
Now its me
Happy and Gay
No more committments
shredding my way
Thence
A SHiP of Relations is sailing my way ... my way....
6 comments:
fabulous fantastic and tooooo gooood.
very well put. but i'd contradict it, this is the tale of one sided love. i dunno much about the story though. but there cannot be a love story w/o the man in the scene or the girl not being. if one starts towards the wrong direction, the other for sure takes the opposite direction. i think a festering wound leads the human mind to think that we've been hurt and we forget that though we sort things and take different routes we still have to meet each other, cos the roads meet somewhere. cheers to your happy and gay life, stay the same. not single thru out :)
meenal i must say its just tooooo good
A nice story abt being in love. Being in a materialistic world, everyone is bothered abt how much we receive frm others in the end. But think abt love and there is a lot to give than to take. Things may look good at the beginning when ur ready to sacrifice , but when u reach a level in a relationship u realise if there is anything more u can give. I think that is one of the reasons for parting ways. Sometimes two individuals r never meant to be together, no matter how hard they try and some may cling on even after separating, tats destiny. I blv that the best is saved for the last and i hope ur days of being single r numbered. Enjoy ur life cuz ur the sailor of ur ship called 'LIFE'
I feel this is a complete and a true love story....This is what practically happens in this sweet world! Relationships are established and they go on well until a day u r left with nothin but wet eyes and broken dreams! this feeling may have been experienced by th writter and is very beautifully compilled and framed in words! hats off to u meenal 2 present such an experience in such an elegant way....Keep up th good work!
man i really gt to say
nice work
oh i mean nice HARD work
so, nw i know u have been workin
jokes aprt
fab.. work
keep up the good work
really nice
nakul.......
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